I did take a couple scenes out (flip phone and sunset), because I didn’t think it was necessary and I didn’t want the video to be too long. I might add it in this weekend if I change my mind. Also I liked how the video ended pitch dark as the girl blew the candle out.

This video was hard to produce but it was fun at the same time. There were so many things I didn’t about or how to do, but the process of figuring it out was somewhat fun. Making this video made me want to explore this new type of art and see what else I can produce.


2 thoughts on “time

  1. I think your video encompasses the general theme of ‘TIME’ in a way that we all can relate to. Pulling scenes out of daily life definitely creates instant connection with the audience!
    There are some technical things that you can improve on. Like others said, you probably could have more variations in shots towards the end. Perhaps you could zoom up on the candle?
    Also, there is something funky with the audio…particularly when it hits a high note. You might want to edit it with SoundTrack Pro to tweak it smoother? Otherwise it is fitting to the way video carries itself.
    Keep it up! 🙂

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